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Treasured and admired
Upon a silken drape
Filled up to burst with admiration
And almost falling apart

Only damaged beyond repair
Always justly loved by all
Damnable self mind rape
Don’t say it again

Not another word
Self reassurance
Self reliance
Doomed

Peril
Nothing left
©2006-2009 ~unloveddreamer
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Submitted: August 22, 2006
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In all honesty, if you are going to my poetry for a rhymescheme, rythem or even a basic beat and flow... FUCK OFF!!!! That's not how I roll or something, A poem is about the story you tell, it's about what you want to talk about, how you feel when you write it, it's life so give in to it already and ENJOY!!!
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nice job! ^__^

its short so i like it................some of ur work is wwwaaayyy to long for me ;}

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Do you believe in death before life???
Lol, short sweet and making no point, exactly how I enjoy my work

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Though we're dead a thousand years, still men can see how beautiful you were; I, how much duller, and yet how far from a fool in loving you... Michelangelo

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